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Nub in Denial 2007-07-06 ch 1,	abuseReading this makes me want it to be Christmas even though it's July and I should be enjoying summer vacation. This was such a cute scenario. I feel like it should be made into a short film or something. It was just too... I dunno... magical? Oh, and romantic haha. Can't forget romantic.
ola 2007-05-20 ch 1,	abusevery much in the spirit of christmas. loved it. had a slightly magical feeling about it, which went very well with the christmas theme. enjoyed it immensely =)
Lady Psychic 2006-12-08 ch 1,	abuseThis is a really well written story. It puts me in the holliday spirit!
CeeJayStar 2006-11-27 ch 1,	abuseI still love it. After so long and so many times of reading it. xD Gosh... Thank you for making me smile. x
Prisoner-11 2006-04-10 ch 1,	abuseE! I like! This was a very sweet story that had me at the get go.
An Unwanted Accesory 2006-04-07 ch 1,	abuseLike the other stories you wrote this was amazing too. I don't really like one shots because I love learning about characters and seeing the plot thicken and finally unfold in a great finaly but I actually beleive that this story was MADE (I know it actually WAS but work with me here) to be a oneshot. just...wow I love all the stories you've written. and I loved the fact that it made Christmas look like a beautiful holiday where miracles happen because to tell you the truth I had honestly forgotten about the beauty of christmas.Analeigh
Dorkie 2006-03-13 ch 1,	abusei just found this, and even though it's not christmas, i still really like it.
TheSeer 2005-12-30 ch 1,	abuseWow. I mean, it was pure fluff, but it's the best fluff I ever remember reading. As one of those people you mentioned who reads your stories, thanks. Speaking of remembering, I don't remember ever hearing someone say "on accident" since I was six and my mother explained that isn't really how you say the opposite of "on purpose." Did he say it because he'd just spent several hours around a six-year-old, or was it a usual habit of his because he had umpty-zillion siblings and cousins, or is it just common usage where you come from and you didn't mean anything by it? I thought it was cute, anyway.
chibicherrychan 2005-12-27 ch 1,	abuseThat was an absolutely adorable story! Cute, cute, cute! The unlikeliness makes it all the more believable... does that make sense? I guess I really want to believe in beautiful love stories happening out of the blue but working to everyone's best interest... Thank you for the beautiful story of Christmas magic induced wonder!
pneumothorax 2005-12-27 ch 1,	abuseVery nice. I liked how you explained the actions honestly and rationally, so there really was no question as to why he was doing it.
mechante fille 2005-12-27 ch 1,	abuseLovely! The coincidences were great, and meeting Cole was like a karmic reward for him choosing to be nice even after his bad experience. Thanks so much for spending your Christmas typing this up for us!
ddz008 2005-12-26 ch 1,	abuseGreat!Aw, I love it, it was so cute and perfect!Wonderful Christmas story! :)
Kittentits 2005-12-26 ch 1,	abuseWow. This was really good. I'm sad it was only a one shot. huggles very nicely done! Happy Holidays!
Jak Refynae 2005-12-26 ch 1,	abuseHey there, never read anything else by you yet but that was really good. I think you should continue it actually. I would love to see more!
DH L'Orange 2005-12-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseand those people who do read your stories really appreciate the gift! very cool concept... loved the whole opening scene in the crowded candy store... and these were some of my favorite lines:"He found a bag, managed to fit all the sloppily wrapped presents inside it—no one had ever taught him how to wrap things properly—wrapped Dylan’s candy and put it on top." i have to sympathize with Gavin on this one. "The houses were much larger and nicer here, trees lining the streets. Christmas lights twinkled in almost every window, blinking snowflakes and reindeer figurines, Santas on sleds and illuminated snowmen."nice description there and i liked this opening description as well"The candy store was a mad rush of color, harshly bright lights and shimmering cellophane against the dark and rainy air outside. The clerks looked disheveled and weary, wrapping candy gifts as quickly as they could, grabbing pre-wrapped boxes off shelves, packing them into the bulging bags of bustling mothers, handing glistening candy canes to slobbering children. " anywho... thanks for the story! : ) DH

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