oh wow, this is so powerful adn beautiful! I love the last few lines, the whole thing is wonderful. Love the way its written. nice work!

this is a truly gorgeous piece. not at all cliched. i love it! its something everyone can relate to. beautiful!

I missed ur stuff and this is the perfect example of why! This was hell good, i very much enjoyed reading it...hehe, now of 2 read the other 30 poems that other ppl have put up since ive been away >_

A very powerful piece. I like it a lot, well done! QueenVixta

I absolutely LOVE the last stanza! Beautiful work! *adds to favs*

~Hawke

I love the last stanza, it's really pretty! ^_^ Good job on this!

Much love, Rosanna.

Nice descriptions you did a great job on this..

very nice. i like your descriptions in this poem and the imagery of the pages of homework blowing away; it really matches the feel of the poem. i really like it. kudos to you! ^^

I love the first stanza, so rich in imagery. I love the second to, so easy to relate to. And I adore the last. It's beautiful. The last two lines are my favorite. What can I say? This is brilliant. Never stop writing.

the ending really reminds me of me and a certain boy... ;)the beginning is kinda like in a teenie movie.. with the football field and so!I really like it though! i wonder where you got this idea from!-X-

Love that last stanza. Perfect!

I too loved the last stanza, it tied the poem together really well. I enjoyed reading it, great stuff!

loved the last stanza.