i loved it! i hate Etta but love the story!
charlotte

This story is loved.

Love the ending!! Awesome, storyline! I admire Chase!:D Well DONE!

yet again you've written a story with so much feeling that i can't help but love it. as many bad things as could have happened and to see such an unlikely couple in chase and etta actually making it together is so beautiful. when etta lost the baby and the time after when she was pushing everyone away made me cry. i felt for all of them because they were all hurting but were unable to help each other through it all. these stories make me wish that i had friends with that kind of loyalty to each other. your stories are wonderful.

Just wanted to tell you that i've loved your story since i first read it 2 years ago and that i still read it sometimes to remind me of what a great story is like.

You're an absolutely amazing writer! I just love to read your stories. You should continue with the series perhaps with the kids a little grown up, or continue with Chase and Etta's daughter getting involved with Greg and Julia's son. That would be an interesting story. :-)

Wow. I've read all of the stories about Chase and Etta and just wanted you to know how good your writing is. Chapter 29 in this story made me cry - as it has many others :-)

Just offering my congratulations to an awesome author :-)

Calyx

ohmygod, i could not love this anymore! That ending was one of the best ive ever read, and i dont usually like endings! Seriously, this is one of the best books ive ever read, you wrote about the miscarriage so amazingly that i was close to tears through that whole period. I noticed though, at the end chase said they hadnt had sex in 2 months, since she bled when she was pregnant, but i was under the impression that it had been much longer than that, with the way everyone acted like she'd been distant for a really long time, and just the way you wrote as she went through the mourning process, it seemed like about four or five months.

The perfect ending to a wonderful story. It was really sad for a while, but never too much, and always real. Your stories are some of my favourites her on FP. You have writing about bad-boys down to a science. I hope there are more stories forthcoming. Just one thing you might want to do: change the status of this and the in-between story to complete (they seem complete, if they arn't ignore this). Plenty of people are more likely to read a story they know they can finish. Again, thank you for the happy time I spent reading your stories.

OMG! That was an amazing ending!I loved it :)thx for such amazing stories...kept me awake all night *_-

Oh my freaking god, that was amazing, and yet agai i loved the ending! Your writing has really progressed, this one was much better in terms of wrting skill and so gripping, as you can see ive swallowed both your stories in one day (well i suppose that sounds plausible considering its now half 2 at night :D) And you wrote about the miscarriage so amazingly well, you had me in tears and writing about stuff like that is really hard to get right, but you did it so well it was heart breaking and the way everyone handled it, with the guys being angry and everything was exactly how i can imagine it would happen so i dont understand the person that said it was unrealistic. But this was such a gripping read, i loved the fact that she went of on her own to do something, and this is noe one of my favourite favourites because it was written so amazingly well and i felt so much closer to the characters and now looking back, the only thing i would like is more antonio scenes.

EXCELENT! WELL DONE AGAIN

OMG i love this story you need to wright a sequal to this and i really want to know is how he will react for his birthday present and if they will acctually have a baby this time i really love it and you should make their baby a girl so you could bring up isabella again! keep writing

I found La Cinq Yesterday, and have read both stories!!
I love it =)
Really good! I love Chase and Etta.
Really good ending, they got a happily ever after!
Except you've left me wanting to read more..hehe.
Any chance we will see another story of Chase and Etta?

omg. loved it. sigh. they got their happily ever after! and about time too! :D this one got me tearing up more than once. and your writing has improved a lot! heaps more description. absolutely fantastic.