beautiful. to me it almost seems...abstract? (for lack of a better term at least) the use of bold and & and the likes simply added to your poem in an almost inexplicable way. the first paragraph caught me. awesome stuff.

~arisu

'olympian snow' floored me. It was one of the most beautiful phrases I've seen in a long time. I love the title as well; it really caught my eye. The style is impeccable, lovely. Especially 'a princess//-y future melts'. The imagery is also quite powerful, the images that come to mind seem to appear strategically as if that was your intent when you were writing it.

lovely imagery and a sweet concept.

i love this. gorgeous work, great imagery.