Lovely pome, I really enjoyed it. What made me very happy was the reference to a Minotaur. : D

Oh.. creepy. I love your authors note btw! I love the imagery, you've worked real hard to get some really explicit, really moving imagery into this poem. I love the bit...

Are you strong enough to survive without my powerWill you become king?Let not my death be in vain

That bit to me, just signifies the hatred you can harbour for someone after they've grown apart from you, after a break up perhaps and the vindictive feelings you want to rest on them...

It's a great little poem, it flows well and as I said beofre, the imagery is what really grabs my attention in this.

Please, please please check out my story 'Wait Another Day' - I'm really not sure where to take it and you captured this well, I'd love your opinions on my work in particular...

And you can flame mine if you need too... although it might make me cry!!

Please hit me back some time and check out my story.

Peace!