that a really amazing image really painfully real

wow...freaking wow..that was awesome..i dont know what else to say

Its interesting how you describe the heart as red plastic; such a durable material yet it also shatters like everything else. You have a unique sense of voice throughout your work.

Much love,Juliet.

wow, great really feel the poem.

I will admit, this isn't the typical poem, and gramatically it has a few errors. It doesn't do much for me, but I can see that you are really pouring your emotions into it, which is the most important part. With a bit of work and TLC (like capitalizing the I's) this could bloom into a beautifuly powerful piece of poetry.

The style is different, and the poem is so tragically beautiful...