|Reviews for 8:53 PM, and the car is parked outside my window|
| cant-kill-heros 1/18/06 . chapter 1
that a really amazing image really painfully real
| lordelfy 1/4/06 . chapter 1
wow...freaking wow..that was awesome..i dont know what else to say
| Faithless Juliet 12/28/05 . chapter 1
Its interesting how you describe the heart as red plastic; such a durable material yet it also shatters like everything else. You have a unique sense of voice throughout your work.
| vcs 12/27/05 . chapter 1
wow, great really feel the poem.
| blackr0se64 12/26/05 . chapter 1
I will admit, this isn't the typical poem, and gramatically it has a few errors. It doesn't do much for me, but I can see that you are really pouring your emotions into it, which is the most important part. With a bit of work and TLC (like capitalizing the I's) this could bloom into a beautifuly powerful piece of poetry.
| randompoetry 12/26/05 . chapter 1
The style is different, and the poem is so tragically beautiful...