wow. this is incredible! i love how you convey your message, but at the same time the poem seems so vague. great job!

Anymore, everyone just wants to be like everyone else. Everyone is the same, no differences...everyone consumed with their own greatness, and material posessions...

I guess that when one stops and realizes that they are living the life others WANT them to live, one would feel the same way...

Beautiful poem.

Wow, it's so beautifully written, I'm left basically speachless.

Love,Draven