well written

this was inspired by Blues Clues? haha awesome. b

Wow, fantastic piece of writing! Lovely beginning.

Lol, three of us sat in psychology once playing with water. Twas fun. Hehe.

Beautiful description though. Lovely balance of fantasy and reality. Seems just right.

I like how when he got onto the roof, he wasn't as impressed as he'd expected to be. Nice sort of twist type thing. (Look at how fantastic at english I am - Lol.)

Nice cyclic ending as well - starting with the description of the melting snow and ending with it. Really nice.

Keep writing!! ; )