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| Toulouse 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHAHAHA...FUNIIE!...i loved it, but while reading it i found myself shouting 'AHA' twice. Would you like to know why my darling?...because i finally found something you did wrong (extremely uncommon btw!) I was very distracted where you spelled 'lunges' where it should have been 'lungs,' and 'smirked' where it should have said 'smirk'd.'...HAHA!!Jessica-1 Ashleigh-ZERO,as of now! |
| Tiny Cafe 2005-12-31 ch 1, | abusehahaha! =) i thought it was great. Definatly a realistic veiw on family reunions (well my families atleast)keep up the good workxoxoRenee |
| veradaine 2005-12-30 ch 1, | abusethat was fuuny! i liked it alot. moms always ** about stupid stuff like tights! who wears those things anyways! lol :) |
| Gray.Quill 2005-12-27 ch 1, | abuseVery amusing, and excellent use of a simple rhyme pattern. Although the girls in my family either simply aren't inclined to fight, or brawl whenever they like without reprimand, because their parents know they'll get beat up too. I don't see anything to nitpick either, so you must be pretty good at this. |