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wolfeh 2006-03-29 . chapter 1
Wow, i bet thats difficult!

I loved this! Really... i dunno ... makes you think, i think...? Yeh..

40 students! wow. big class.

KW!!

~wolfeh (11.53 in the am)
Eirien 2006-01-17 . chapter 1
Good portrayal of such a situation, I almost felt like in the classroom myself. I really like that last stanza.
Wasted Postage 2005-12-29 . chapter 1
That has to be pretty rough, and frustrating. You did an excellent job portraying the situation, though.

Great work!

~*~AbunaiChikara
elegiac lies 2005-12-27 . chapter 1
wow, you have an interesting situation, and i cant even begin to imaging what it would be like. So luckily you wrote the poem- i think you have done a good job of conveying both the situation, but also the emotions, and i particularly like the last line - "and give clarity to chaos", which i think rounds the poem of effectively.good job!
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