Always fun thoughts, those. . .but the way you wrote this makes it appear more as a poem than an essay. Perhaps you should consider switching sections. . .?

Kat

This is... really good, stream-of-consiousness is good, it really works for this. I... just really love it, the imagery, the emotions... all... good, very much so, I like! lots.

And... yeah, VERY long time, no see... I remember when I was your best reviewer and you wrote the poem Thank you to ArtyChick. And then I disappeared. ...I don't know. It's good, I like it. It's the first author alert I've actually looked at for so long. I pretty much disappeared from fictionpress, from everything.

I'm sort of coming back slowly. I don't know. Life is too hard.

I'm still eternally uninspired for reviews!! So, as usual, you'll have to take my word on this newest piece of yours that it's great. Hope you've had some smiles lately - wish I could make people smile like I used to with you, with my reviews... Life is hard.

Anyway. This is long and off-topic. GREAT WORK!

paper plane co-pilot...that's such a harsh image for some reason. I really like this-it's brutal without being rough.