Very deep and well written. This had a lot of amazing lines in it, like the first one. I'm adding this to my favorite stories list.

That was really good . I loved the very first line.

Good poem! nice flow, and the deepness is... deep. you well express the intensity of these emotions. well written!

Fab! I loved the first line, i was totally captured by it! nicely written..well done

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