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squiggle-line 2006-01-28 . chapter 1
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"so many words have been spoken/outlined in gold..." That's gorgeous imagery. And I like how you destroy it immediately afterwards with "holding no meaning because you have yet to decipher my code"

"blurring into the limelight" !

absentmindedly as one word, instead of two?

"in an absence of thought" is a nice line too...but you already used absentmindedly earlier so it sounds kinda redundant? Maybe use anothe word?

Nice. =D
just a teardrop 2005-12-27 . chapter 1
gorgeous work! il add you to my faves i think!
a lonely september 2005-12-27 . chapter 1
'in an absense of thought' really suits the whole limelight theme. nice job.
Ellin Louise 2005-12-27 . chapter 1
Well written, i love the second line.
Infection 2005-12-27 . chapter 1
this was good, liked it a lot.
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