He doesn't like u and never will

I really love this poem. It's almost unfair that you kick ** at both stories and poetry. Your word choice and selective repetition is awesome. You should definitely make a portfolio to send away for scholarship money, and this one should absolutely be included.

On a personal note, don't loose hope! Not all is lost. We girls are cursed with shortsightedness. Yes, there will be other guys if this one doesn't work out. And this one plays the clarinet.

::snork::

Hold out for a brass player. ;-)

'Shut the joints and seams up tightAnd throw every magnet in the oceanI'll wrap myself up in these swirling arpeggiosAnd try to eradicate you from my mind'that was amazing. i love the sense of no regret in this poem. nice job.