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| FrozenKiwi 2006-01-03 ch 1, | abuseLovely. Have I mentioned how good at rhyming you are? It's not the same ol' cliche "love-dove, heart-apart" thing. Cheers! |
| Ildri 2005-12-27 ch 1, | abusewow! T-T that's so pretty! YOU'VE FINALLY POSTED SOMETHING UP! :D im so proud of you!(jk) |
| Ellin Louise 2005-12-27 ch 1, | abusethe poem flows well and other than the last line, the rhyme doesn't seem at all forced, which is hard to do. |
| Kaitlyn J. Richards 2005-12-27 ch 1, | abuse...superb. |