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Mosquito
The Postscript
2006-01-12 . chapter 1
This brings memories of a person I know who is a vegitarian and cares so much about animals that he will not kill a mosquito resting on his arm. Kudos for spelling mosquito correctly...that's way further than I would ever get. ^^ Keep writing.
I Like Pancakes
2005-12-28 . chapter 1
That was quite humorous, I agree...However, I thought of the 'die die die' part very harsh. Overall, this is a truthful and funny poem.
eringobraugh
2005-12-27 . chapter 1
Not very nice to the mosquitos, are you? Lots of bias. But I hate mosquitoes, too. funny
Azazal
2005-12-27 . chapter 1
Funny, although somewhat disturbing.
The lines and words that you bring up for a second time add a nice ring to the poem.
I'm more of a story person myself. I dont really know much about poetry, but I enjoyed this one. Nice work.
BTW, you're from South Korea? I really dont know anything about it. All I know is that Oldboy was made there.
Its always interesting to see a different perspective.
-Azazal
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