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| sleeping Pisces 2006-08-20 ch 1,  | abuseThis may have taken over as my favorite of your work. I love the sad way this is written. Emeraly blood is very original, and the last line wrapped it up nicely. Great work here. Daze |
| multiples of six 2005-12-31 ch 6, | abuseOoh... a couple of these made me shiver a little. Very deep. Some of them make me think of someone lying on the grass with a notebook staring up at the trees and philosophizing. I love the questions especially.. "Do they expect to die soon?/Do they have dreams?" "Do they embrace death?" So pretty. =) |
| Majorkami 2005-12-27 ch 6, | abuseIt's like a story made entirely of haiku. These create such crisp mental pictures of autumn. Good work! |