Contrary to the previous review, I like how you use "breeze" at both ends of the poem, like bookends. It makes it feel like your explaining something that is obvious, and yet are waxing eloquent about it. Like, "It's the sun, y'know, big yellow ball of flaming gas that we revolve around? The sun." I like it. Plus, it's a very true and honest poem, which I admire. Well done.

I wonder, though, why you added the last part? Is it to add more emphasis that it's a breeze? "Breeze. blah blah blah blah. Breeze." Or is it just there? If it was to add more emphasis I didn't feel much because there was no leading action to such a climax. This is, however, an interesting view on a breeze. But, it's more of just telling. You're telling us it's _, that it can _, that it's part of _. But telling can really only convince an audience so much, you know? If you were to add more details and in a way, supporting evidence by means of imagery, it would bring more... meaning out of it.