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| Tytherpol 2007-03-24 ch 1,  | abuseThe rhyme makes this poem flow well. And the purpose and point is pretty gangster, too. You could just about quote any part of this poem, it's really that cool but uh I like "This year in the sky" that made me smile. Good job you. ~Sara. |
| elvenstorm 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abusePowerful piece. Like the way you've added the sadness to what is normal seen as a joyous occasion. Really drives the message home. Well done. |
| poetic abortion 2005-12-29 ch 1, | abuseif I say, 'I Love You & Want Your Babies?!' would it rub the wrong way? (GAH!, you inspired me. thank you! :)) ~* noelle |
| cornered.sensations 2005-12-27 ch 1, | abusei like this, i can actually picture how it was on Independence Day. Nice job |