This is just wonderful - wonderful!

This is really good :) I've got a big grin on my face :)

Interest definitely captured (skips off to read next chapter)!

Yah. And so ends the story... eh bien, it was good while it lasted *nodnod* Yah. (wait, I said that before...)

Kekeke.

*reviews*

*onto next chap*

*grins*

*loves reading good writing*

Um. Captured anyone's interest? Nah. You gotta be kidding, right?... s'not like anything INTERESTING happens...

...kekeke.

lol the first line is hilarious. this is really well written. i love the cliffhanger. can't wait to read the next chap!

Hello! :-) First, regarding my haiku: yes, I was just kidding. My poetry is all right, though some are much better than others. :-P And second, your story is intriguing. I like large fields with wild pure white daisies, among other things. -O And I'm sorry you collapsed.

If I found Johnson on Yahoo! Personals, I'd totally go for him.

Nasus! Is male! :snickers: I want him to meet his counterpart in reality.

Also. :whispers conspiratorially: I think I have a crush on Yunik. For what reason? I don't know. Kekeke.

Mostly, I want to know what happens, or actually, what the kupo is going on behind the scenes. So, I shall demand of you the same thing everyone else demands of you. You know.

Love it!

I'm beginning to think that Johnson's maybe not a daemon...hm.

keep writing, it keeps the enchanted table legs from eating my shpedoinkle!

...*cracks up*

"The hamsters in the corner huddled closer together" XDD

And I LOVE the fights between Johnson and his phone...

XDD CD

This took me too long to get to...

I really like the first person a lot better. This isn't to say that Johnson's not fun. It's just pleasing to see what Layla thinks of him. The cell phone is cute, so you should have a big part for him somewhere here. Promise?

If Johnson is running down the hallway with Layla in his arms, it must be difficult for them to have a conversation together. You kind of cut out the reality of escaping from the school. Maybe add a, "As he skidded around a corner, dodging a vending machine, Johnson [insert tag here]." And in the end, when the phone has spoken to Layla, she says that she collapsed. Isn't she in Johnson's arms? In fact, if she's in his arms, wouldn't he have to fumble for the phone?

Otherwise, very nice.

He he he!

Smiley, smiley, he!

I expect I din't get half of thisand will read it again when completely sober but it being 11:30 on new years eve can you blame me?

No, so anyway, this is realy cool except for the bit where you wrote 'the boys rang through the darkness' you might need to add voice or something to that effect.

Happy new year by the way!

*cracks up* i don't know what johnson is (oh wait. he's a daemon. nemmind...) but anyway, he's HILARIOUS!

and who's Landon? and is it Layla like the song (lub the song), or did you name her after someone else?

thanks for the review. The story isn't over yet though...

:) CD

Wow...why the heck did you read MY story! You shoulda been adding MORE to THIS! BAD Cheese, BAD! *hits Le Cheese with a banana*