Another sad poem, but loads of people have the same feeling that they're unwanted in their own home and still are searching for new ones. Anyways, I like how you defined the average home for the average person. Good.

This was really sad, and while I cannot truely relate..I can understand where it is coming from and you get a clear picture of its message. Some parts a little repetitive, which I think you were going for..but some more details may have added more. But otherwise..very creative and well written