Keep going! I like it!

Saxophoneplayer15

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Wow. Your story was very intriguing, and its open-endedness was extremely effective and mesmerizing! Left me wondering what happened to her, what the band teacher knew about her, and what they shared...the past, the present, and what would happen next. As a one-shot, OR a continuing story, your piece stands well as is. Good job. :D