Reviews for Falling Apart - FictionPress.com

Hilmary-Oceans 2006-05-19 ch 1,	abuseIt's me! You did an amazing job. Somehow capturing the youthful essence in these words. Is it really a song? Or just a poem written in the way of a song? Anyway ... well done. xoxo Hilmary-Oceans
forgotten-magick 2006-01-09 ch 1,	abusethis is one of the best songs i've read on here. the first two lines of the chorus are so good. those are my favorites. somehow they make the song more real. anyway, yet another wonderful work.
hidden sapphire 2005-12-31 ch 1,	abuseI love the lyrics. I really wish I could hear the tune you have to go with them. This is really good.
Changethesubject 2005-12-30 ch 1,	abusecool. i like the way you write 'you're not you' but i'm not as fond of 'i'm not me'. it fits and everything..i don't know. i think it was more emphatic just with the you're not you. but it's very good. i like verse two the best but the chorus is also well written.
Hidden Lies 2005-12-30 ch 1,	abuseAwesome work.. what else to say?
mizu no kokoro 2005-12-29 ch 1,	abuseloved the rhyming~ gave it a great rhythm~ good work keep writing!
a lonely september 2005-12-28 ch 1,	abusedo you have your own tune to this? it's a nice song, i like the chorus. : )
just a teardrop 2005-12-28 ch 1,	abusethis is really powerful. great work :D
EringoBraugh 2005-12-28 ch 1,	abusewhoa, that reminds me of a song by Avril Lavigne (Lavine? How do you spell it?) Very expressive, though. Probably even better with a tune