 bulletproof.cupid 2006-03-14 . chapter 1heh, i could relate. . . especially with the ** french instead of spanish (perfect, imperfect, subjunctive, past conditional, and the whole load of **.)
a haze of/scantron green, abcde (and enough/all-nighters to make you see certain f’s)-- this was my favourite line for some reason. yeop, with how i'm going. . . yeah, fill in the blanks.
awesome work =) |
 The Postscript 2006-02-17 . chapter 1Yup...good days, good days...nice work with this. Keep writing. |
 Jason Mack 2006-02-03 . chapter 1Fully enjoyed it. Great detail and explanation of a feeling that practically all students experience.
From the very first phrase "kept awake by caffeine" I understood the rhythm at which the work flows. Very fast paced, appears almost as a blur. Along with the seemingly random thoughts here and there where it adds to the illusion. Great Job =D
I loved it. O_< Depsite the fact ._. I really hate cramming. |
 the naked civil servant 2006-01-22 . chapter 1man that flowed so perfectly. such a rush :P |
 backseats on thursdays 2006-01-21 . chapter 1Love it!
(don'w we all know the feeling of cramming... but isn't it fun?) |
 Moondog Dozier 2006-01-05 . chapter 1The pace of this really accentuates the overall theme. The dialogue runs quick as a mind would in this situation. I like the "scantron green, abcde(and enough- all-nighters to make you see certain f's), this play on letters works so well in this work. Overall, a great blurry eyed look at the struggle to cram it all in. |
 spare change 2006-01-03 . chapter 1 haha! the chaos and panic of cramming for the finals. i hate that. well captured. haha. |
 Sugar-Craze 2006-01-02 . chapter 1the story of my life! teehee! very cute, loved the flowing, but the sense of rushing word use in this poem! MUAH Magnificent!! |
 sunday night sky 2005-12-28 . chapter 1i love this - its very well thought out! nice work. |
 thursdays and rain 2005-12-28 . chapter 1very clever c: |