its a good story.

UGHH I JUST FINSIHED UR STORY ..of what u wrote so far.. and i look and u havent up dated in like a YEAR! UGH.. are u still writigint this story?

nice job

WHAT THE HELL? UPDATE FFS! lol, this is a GREAT story! CONTINUE, CONTINUE!

Btw: you asked me a question if Kris should move on or no... Apparently as you put it this way and you made it perfect that Kristina took her time and moving on and suddenly falling in love with Jaiden is pretty normal... At least she need someone to be there for her!

jaid sounded like a prick in the begining. update soon!

oh wow. youre dead. okay? good.

YOU CANNOT LEAVE IT LIKE THAT U FREAKING LOSER!

and i KNEW lauren was being abused! (i did didnt i?) although thats not really good...

freakin * of a dad

jaiden jaiden jaiden jaiden *sings*

and can u kill kris? coz she has to get with him! also then i could have jaiden...i like my plan! )

icky guilty over marty (

and her dad is odd. funny tho...

yes. love u for the update. but ur still dying...

satisfied about the lauren-ness )

eh. patience and i havnt met yet

Sorry,

What is going to happen to jaiden and kris? is lauren going to be ok? Please let jaiden and kris get together, they need each other! Also let lauren get out of her bad situation and turn in her dad.

PLEASE UPDATE! when you can

Yay! ) Is it still break for you? In any case, I hope you had an awesome Christmas and New Year.

Wow, so it finally came out. I feel so bad for Lauren-she's such a kind person and she tries so hard, yet she feels like it's all her fault. I really like Lauren and Katie, though, and I hope things will be looking up from now on. :)

I guess, in a way, Kris is still uncertain of how she should deal with people and everything... she started to get more complex here, and I guess it kind of shows the aftereffects of Marty's death. I hope things work out for her, too, though.

I like Jaiden a lot-he's really nice in a laid-back kind of way. Sometimes, I wish he would take the initiative a bit more, but then, in the end, I guess he's being respectful, which is really important, too.

Haha, yeah, I'll have to try to send you an e-mail soon ;)

Have a great day!

omigosh! i almost didn't recognise a ficpress update when i saw it pop up in my inbox! woah much?

and...yay! lauren lauren lauren! sings a merry tune...

and i love how the dad's so much nicer now that he's all understanding and whatnot...

""Don't do anything I wouldn't do!" he called."

)

OH YAY AND UPDATE!

and YAY I GOT THE ALERT!

I wanna chake her like crazy! you know that right? Your the auther, SHAKE HER LIKE CRAZY!

okay so i finlly got an update?

anyway oh. how many more chaps to go?

shes so dumb. just get with the guy already!

I really like this story, honestely. I just have one thing to comment on: When kris said that she was mad at lauren for dumping her problems on kris when she was dealing with the whole marty thing, well hello! Lauren happily dealt with kris when she was mourning over marty while she herself was going through things. It just made kris seem really selfish.

) Hey, I'm sorry if I haen't been reviewing. I've been reading though! I love the progress. )

Oh! It's filipinogirl. xD

thhey were so close.

great story so far