|Reviews for Last Thing On My Mind|
| SolisLuna 7/16/06 . chapter 23
Ok, he's gonna be okay, that's good. Good update, do it again soon!
| Kylie1403 7/16/06 . chapter 23
and does Loz get beaten at home?
awsome chappy love!
| euphorix 7/16/06 . chapter 23
omg... what happened to lauren? geez..
| p-y-a 7/16/06 . chapter 23
*gasp* SHES BEING ABUSED! finally tho. more lauren! )
and *breathes* hes okay. u wuldnt kill him anyway. coz he and kris are going to end up together. )
gah. dad wants the comp. this review is not over.
but. yay for quick update! and also...WHO is abusing lauren?
| Guest 7/15/06 . chapter 22
Ah! Another accident... Update soon! And the other story you started was nice too :)
| LostInnocentOracle 7/11/06 . chapter 22
You'd gloat? *gasps* Mean!
I loved this chapter, but you can't leave us with a cliffhanger like that! I need more!
| MIDNIGHT-PIXIE 7/11/06 . chapter 22
yep...a cliffie...i love those...of course i love the story...i mean how could i not...ur stuff is always great...great little conflict going too
keep it up
| MIDNIGHT-PIXIE 7/11/06 . chapter 21
well...i don't think things will ever be cool with connor...we're supposed to go camping in a few weeks but he's slowly backing out of it...and i'm pretty sure soon we aren't gunna be speaking anymore but it doesn't bother me...i'm really starting to just hate him and everything i used to like about him now annoys me...lol
ok...lovin it as always...i shall give a more full review next chapter.
we're getting an awsome thunderstrom here
| cbprice25 7/9/06 . chapter 22
AH ! Dahling, that is not fixing it. This is not good.
I'm in Québec at the moment. Wee ! So yes, I am still following the story (most likely you were not at all worried, but there you go). Update soon !
| special 7/8/06 . chapter 22
*Double Gasp* Kris! I hope she doesn't blame herself.
Wow...this is a really amazing story you've got here..
Your writing is captivating and I just..wow..I always feel like I know what your characters are going through..not that I've been through what they've been through, but because of the way your writing brings me in.
I Heart Jaiden and Kris!
Seriously...their relationship is kinda odd..and totally endearing. They are soo cute and I Love them both.
Kris seems like a really strong girl. I can tell that she isn't used to the attention Jaiden's giving her, but welcomes it all the same. I admire her.
Jaiden is a really thoughtful person. From the frozen mango yogurt to keeping the notebook, he seems like a really sweet guy. And behind his stony facade, he's as vulnerable as Kris is.
I had a feeling Jaiden had the notebook, but I kinda forgot about it after a while. ) Lol. I actually think it was sweet (and thoughtful) that he kept the notebook away from Kris. But I probably would have been mad. :)
I warmed up to both your characters pretty quickly, and I really Love your story.
Keep up the great work and update soon!
Oh! And if you're still doing the object thingie..could you include...err..a Hello Kitty clock? Sorry..first thing that came to my mind.
| Fresh Harvest 7/7/06 . chapter 22
I read this when you first posted it, I think, but I didn't have time to review properly until now :P
For some reason, something about the relationship between Kris and Jaiden pulls me in. It keeps me interested and wanting to know what happens. Hmm, so now I'm curious about what he was going to show her...
At first, while I was reading, I thought Jaiden had actually stolen the notebook so Kris could start getting better and learn not to rely just on the notebook. :o
Poor Jaiden! :O He can't be in an accident. :(
It almost reminds me of a Korean drama, but I like how you can take clichés and twist it so it's original somehow. Oh, and I saw your website before-I like it a lot! :) At first, I was confused because I thought you and Lindy were two different people? But I guess you're not :p
You're Christian? :) That's awesome; me too! One of my weak spots is being a hopeless (hope-filled, rather) romantic (real romance, not the cheap MTV style stuff), but... then again, who isn't? But I'm trying to live purely for my future husband :)I love the way you described it... Jesus really is amazing. I know I make a lot of mistakes, but He stays constantly amazing. It's so unbelievable :o
P.S. Another dedication would be awesomely appreciated! If you don't mind, that is :P And that's such a cool idea (with dedicating for new reviewers)-if I ever decide to post anything here, I might have to copy you on that count :PAlso glad camp was good ;)
Have a spectacular day )
| Shorty Baby 7/7/06 . chapter 22
oh hell no!
That is not okay!
You better update like now!
| verticalgrey 7/7/06 . chapter 22
What an absolute cliffhanger!
| p-y-a 7/6/06 . chapter 22
euurggh! I HATE YOU! *stabs*
back to chapter..
i want to know what he was gna show her!
i knew he had it! i told you! i said hed taken it so she can get over marty! i was partly rite...
poor jaiden (
and we're back to the 'I HATE THAT ENDING!' *screams* new chapter. plz!
waits for laurens secret...and dads secret...
i already whined. i wanna know what he was gna show. just coz YOU already know.
se i give long reviews! ) and you LIKE my reviews! ) i think this one was a bit shorter...mainly me going. OMG! ur so mean!
| Kylie1403 7/6/06 . chapter 22
O m G! You biatch!
plus isnt that how her friend died?
oh and you smell