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| Autumn Reflections 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abusecool and still very, very strange and twisted, but i mean, why not? if you can imagine it, write it! i mean, i love these little one shots. it isnt often that one comes across things that are so divinly twisted! i love the way this is written, tho it confused me a little...as everything does, i just adore it! keep writing! Kyonkichi^^ |
| chibicherrychan 2005-12-29 ch 1, | abuseWhoo you're intense! Is it figurative or is there really a body being buried there? Well, it's nicely wirtten and quite interesting, but can you say, "creepy". Anyway, good work. |
| Archipelago 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abuseThis was like a poem. It was very weird too. And the slash was bearly even implied, which is a bug because I like slash. This was nice though. A poetry format might make it easier to read though; I looked at the page and then glanced away in pain when I saw how it all meshed together. Yeah. :). Update something. Please? Bye. |
| multiples of six 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abuseIt was odd, yes, but I like this one too. It comes off as very poetic, somehow, but it still manages to tell a story. I love the lines.. "We are the oblivion of the bright lights of clubs" as well as "We are the throbbing of blood in your veins." Keep writing!! |