Holy...0_0 This is phenomenal...

“Aren’t you worried about being left alone with me?” I ask. I hold up my arms. “Look. I’m not in your office anymore, so no handcuffs. I could easily rape you.”

“You’re a pedophile.”

“I have a wife.”

“I trust you.”

I say nothing. You smile at me. It’s bright and friendly. I feel odd when you do it.

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best script ever. That lucky guy! I would've probably melted if my psychologist told me that with a warm smile (not that I do have one).

I now see that he is subconciously reflecting upon himself -deciding if what he did was right from his point-of-view, or wrong from what his therapist is saying. By the way, do you plan on telling his therapist's name? I'm just asking. XD. And another thing that I noticed is that he is starting to have a little crush on his blonde therapist (way to go Derrick! XDD). Keep this up and I might predict that he is totally in love with her. Great job!!

This story was fantastic while it lasted. I wish you hadn't decided to stop writing it, but I'm sure you had your reasons. With how little I've been writing lately, I really shouldn't talk anyway, lol.

excellently written. look forward to reading more. :)

mhm.
after his rather unexpected gratification is guilt.
I can empahize with that notion somewhat. On a un-pedophilic level of course.
good chapter as always.

derrick's quite intense in this one.
I love how they both butt heads.
its vaguely adorable.

ah-Zoe was adorble.
This chapter made my stomach writhe, Derrick has a way of manipulation that disturbs me.
well done.

i like his therapist chick.
she sounds darling.
Derrick is beginning to love-how cute.

I love this chapter.
My favorite part was-
//Going behind your desk and approaching you from behind, I stick my hands out and begin digging through your golden tresses. They are soft and silky. You freeze under my touch, daring not to move. I can feel your frailty.

m.
i like the details of his thinking, very in-depth and personal.
You ronded and fleshed him out nicely.
Oh, and the Therapist is spot on.

ah.
nice.
He seems to be a somewhat comically derranged character.
lovely firt chapter-obscene and disturbing, just perfect.

Hm, interesting.

wow. ok I'm all caught up now and as disturbing as mr. hawthorn is, I'm intriuged. plz continue!

wow. that's all I can say is just wow.
i've read the 1st chapter and I'm now going onto the 2nd. it was wonderfully written, absolutley nothing wrong with it and the way you make derik completley guiltless is written like a professionally! applause!