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| Faithless Juliet 2005-12-28 ch 1,   | Fascinating piece; its somewhat whimsical yet with good detail. You give us hard facts like “lazy legs” yet also the fact that there are no survivors. Its an interesting combination. Keep up the good work. Juliet. |