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me 2009-11-03 . chapter 1
hahahahahaha i LOVED it!
Tee Elle Double Yew 2008-11-15 . chapter 12
I enjoyed this story, so funny.
Good Job!
instantmojo4 2008-08-05 . chapter 1
cool beginning to this story. i like it already
Mistress of Apple Pie 2008-03-23 . chapter 12
such a witty story! I finished reading it in one whole day and I have to say, I loved it!

Amazing =)
Zoius and the Devil 2007-12-14 . chapter 12
aww, what a sweet story. i loved Trent and...uh, what's the main character's name again? though my favortite characters were the family. Theo, Dante and the rents were just so gosh darned cute...
i loved the ending. and the ending to ch 11.
great fic!
"'Personally I think any man who wears pink has issues, and is a wonderfully valid example of the crisis of masculinity we are suffering in this post modernistic world.'"
and that line made me crack up.
-kon
Liviania 2007-11-19 . chapter 12
This is a nice, short, (surprisingly) sweet story. I must admit, Erik was rather annoying at the beginning.

Also, people didn't realize Trent was gay? And he walks around in pink Lacoste shirts and asked a guy to a cafe?

Livi
The Falconer 2007-08-07 . chapter 12
Wow. This was fun!! I love Erik's family. It has to be the most interesting family I've encountered in a story. Extra points for the French grandmother with the multiple husbands!!

Question: how come Trent drives a trendy car and wear designer clothes and yet lives in such poor conditions? Seemed a little paradoxical to me...

Great story, though. Kudos. I'm going to check out your other ones.
Falconer.
unknwnfuture 2007-06-21 . chapter 12
Yay you finished! :) Nice ending.
BananaPhone 2007-06-20 . chapter 12
aww and is heart was 3 times bigger... very nice stoy, i really enjoyed it :D
ironicdeathx 2007-03-27 . chapter 11
Despite the few spelling/grammar mistakes this story is amazing! I havent't read anything with such wit, humour and cynisism in such a long time.

I absolutely love this story and urge you to continue!
Thecreativewritingstudent 2007-02-28 . chapter 11
This is such a cute story, I love it! If this story was a person, I'd hug it til it's bones broke, I love it that much.
unknwnfuture 2007-02-25 . chapter 11
Just read all the chapters in one sitting and I am loving it. You've done a really good job with Erik, his transition has been very believable and your writing is excellent. Too bad there's one chapter left but you know what you are doing. :) I really enjoyed it.
Ben Wuest 2007-02-24 . chapter 10
Oh my GOD! You are by far the best at writing I have seen on this site for a LONG time. Seriously, truly, you have me completely hooked into this story; I can feel like EVERYTHING that he feels, and that's a sign of good writing - when your audience feels what you feel.
Awesome job.

b.
Jwei Lih 2007-02-15 . chapter 5
wot! another interesting chapter down...
Ben Wuest 2007-02-06 . chapter 9
So nice to see that I caught your story on your return, not before your "long leave". I must say, and more formally, that you truly are one of the most spectacular writers on this site that I have ever come across. Truly, honestly; your word choice is marvelous, your plot choice is incredibly unique, and the way your fit individual character into individual characters is mind-blowing. Fantastic job on this, I wish I could express my awe better.

B.
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