Neat! I love reading things about insanity, and the doubt about sanity, and so on. Its always been interesting to me. But I've never been able to write something convincingly about it. Terriffic job! Beautifully done.

Oh, very neat... I was relaying the fact that it was someone dbeating their own sanity to my grandfather, and he responded that he does that quite often.

Sadly enough, so do I. But that is a terriffic portrayal of mental instability... Displaying some sanity. Her mentioning that it all folds in on itself (her mental wandering) and then the doctor mentioning what he does... Great piece.

Gah!! *shivers*I'm not insane... I'm not... not..

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Gah!! *shivers*I'm not insane... I'm not... not..

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Gah!! *shivers*I'm not insane... I'm not... not..

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@_@ This is creepy, considering I've done that to myself when I was 12. That was before I started writing, though. Now I'm too busy thinking about writing to drive myself insane. Not like my sanity's already out the window, but eh... worth a shot.

Now for the authoresque comments. The ability to capture a questionable, instable mindset is truly hard, depending your take on the whole mental issues idea. (I've heard of people claiming it everything from 'the work of demons' (Hmm...) to a 'contagious disease, so it varies) But you seem to have done a pretty plausible job with it. Nice work, and looking for the next chapter of 'Vendetta'.

Editted. If you've alreaddy read, I would suggest again, unless you really don't care. The scene with the DR. should be at the end now. Based off of a comment somone made to me. I liked the idea, so I replaced the chapter. Well, though I'd mention that. Okay, I'm going now.

GdlN

You wanna know the freakiest part of that? That it sounds EXACTLY like the ending of Carrie...

Sue ends up in a little white room, rocking back and forth, and saying the opening monologues from the show over again... like the whole thing has been playing over and over in her head the whole time...

Yeah, you're right. That is one of the few things that freaks me out...

Nice. Very Nice.