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| sanguini 2006-07-24 ch 1,  | abuseyou unleash the horror with a shade of grimness and subtlety. great job. ^^ |
| Gothic Innocence 2006-05-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm not signed in at the moment, but i have to give you this link. http://w.winningwriters.com/contests/war/wa_guidelines.php you might already know about it, you might not, but i really recommend that you send this poem in. it is absolutly amazing. The dead line is May 31st, and i wish you luck if you decide to enter. |
| helium lost 2006-03-29 ch 1, | abuseWow, I like the setup of this poem. I'm currently learning about the Holocaust in class, and some of the details my teacher imparts in class are truly horrific in that people can do that to others. In any case, I like the fragments and line breaks; they add to the atmosphere and the mood of the poem, and the imagery and description is great. Nice job :) - hl |
| Sophie Ulquiorra Allen 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is a wonderful poem. Very nice, and I love the imagery and beautiful emotion. Neat allegory between 6. |
| in theory 2006-01-07 ch 1, | abuseA very thought-demanding piece, and so deep. Nice job. |
| cornered.sensations 2006-01-04 ch 1, | abusebeautiful and blunt, keep it up! |
| Aslan Israel 2005-12-30 ch 1, | abuseNo sugar coating here. But I like how blunt you are, and especially the last stanza. Nice job. |
| Jezsh 2005-12-29 ch 1, | abuseinteresting topic, you rarely see genuinely thoughtful pieces about this kind of thing. I very much like the working, the mix of german and english and use of italic, as well as the hyphenation. It's a really great piece. |
| frigg 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, this was beautiful, all your imagery just stunning. I especially liked the first stanza. And the line about 6 applied to 8. Bravo, dahling!J |
| sloppy firsts 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abusethe night of broken glass...well done. |
| SSSSS 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abuseDas Gedicht ist prima; es gefällt mir. Du bist ein shön Dichter. Bist du ein Jude? Tschau,Sam |