This is a great fairytale, though I'm more partial to less mundane endings. It still is really nice, though.

Aww...That's just so *sweet*. We loves it, C.D.It's light, and fun, and romantic, and what's best about it is that it feels so real. The dynamic between Lars and Ella is perfect. She basically acts like a real girl would in that situation, and Lars is perfect as the male friend. This element is something that makes me identify with the characters almost immediately, which is extraordinary in a story this short.Great stuff. Keep it up. Off to read Langley's Ark next and see how much of it I remember...*M'lady...*_Ahrar

This is a very nice piece. I've checked out a couple other items that you've written, and I must say they are all of a wonderful quality. This piece has a profound honesty to it, yet still carries the beauty and wonder of a fairy tale.