I loved it. The story honestly depreesed me at first but oddly enough it ended up on a hopefull note. It was so realistic you thought out the characters history and its effects on their personality so well. Peter and andy both had ass holey tendencys but they redeming qualitys.


This is one of the most well writen storys I have read in a while. Im suprised you havent got more reviews for this.



Alecea_Sushine

I LOVE THIS SO HARD. brb while I cry at the utter sappiness of that last part. D'AW.
I really like this, for a few reasons - the whole inferiority complex thing Pete's got going there? You pulled it off really well. And what can I say, I love the inferiority complex shit. Identification to some effect, or whatever.
Also, you really did the concept of the father's influence brilliantly. Seriously, it was amazing. Lots of times people think they're going against their parents, when it's actually their parents' influence that's making them go against their parents, and that whole cycle? I love that. And you portrayed it perfectly, too. Perfect scenarios and everything.
Another thing, but kind of linked to the last two, you had the most brilliant personalities ever. Very human, and very real. Complex and logical and true. You did the personalities superbly, right down to how the smallest things affect us, and how one thing manages to lead to another when they're not actually related. Your portrayal of the human psyche is goddamned amazing. I really love that.
Lastly, I have to say. I have so many quotes that I love from this I might have to compile a list and save them somewhere, because your characters' ideas on life and everything are just so, so real. Not necessarily true, like all human opinions are, but they're logical and feasible and it's what happens, isn't it? In real life. Those are actual opinions and ideas, and I really, really like that. Amazing job (this is the longest review I've given, EVER), this is definitely one of the top of my favourites.

well done- i enjoyed it alot!

Wow this story is totally awesom :)
I really loved it,
It was a really nice ending

Wow, that was such a bitch to read,
it's 12:30 in the morning, my light is
flickering, i havent slept in a while,
and im strangely hungery,

but i read it, and depressingly we must be people
who write similar. I mean, i write depressing macabre,
but in a really similar style to your writing,
anyway my light went out,
and i cant see, blindness is non-apealing,
great job on the story,
i wish i could be stuffed writing something...

xObsidian

I've never heard of the term spranging, but then again I'm from the North East. But I guessed as much that he was just trying to bum some money.

gahahahahaha. its so true. only assholes fall for assholes. and since peter loves andy and vice versa, its all good >__> GAH. the part where peter was all pathetic-y and clinged to andy and andy was all like BAD DOG! made me feel sad ): THE ARGUMENT AND HENRY GETTING BEAT UP BY ANDY (CAUSE HE WAS JEALOUS AND PETER WANTED HIM TO GET JEALOUS) WAS LIKE KDJFLKSDFJLKDFJKJF -CRY- but the kiss at the end was random and made me feel really happy

Really nice story. And Peter's reaction to rug girl and Harry? Um.. he feels that they're both young and naive and innocent and grows a conscience?

Peter is kind of an ass in this chapter :( What he did to Henry was awful...it wasnt even funny...oh and i love that andy speaks spanish, its sexy

I had a good three hours reading all this! Great story! -FG

Peter is kind of a bastard isnt he? I still like him though, oddly enough. Dont know how I feel about Andy, Tom sorta saddens me and Sam gets on my nerves. :D I like the story so far! -RS

This was a really good story. Part of that last chapter had me crying like a baby.

OH GOD. IT ENDED.
T_T OH MY GOD WHAT AM I GOING TO DO?! NOW THAT IT'S ENDED.
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-speeds off to your profile page-

xD it took me 10 seconds to get the first sentence... but i get it! i get it! -hurrah-

Oh MY fucking cheesey cracker!! THAT WAS AN AWESOME STORY! even tho there were no lemons =( BUT STILL DAMN