well it's certainly one attention grabing beginning, that's for sure. i would like to see where this might lead, so i hope you intend on posting some more

wow, I don't know if you've ever read Bridget Jones's Diary, but u should because the writing styles are so alike.this is amazing so far, and I hope u write some more :)

I've read this one before. It's called "Bridget Jones's Diary."

Amen to the main character. She's just said what most girls have felt or do feel. And I like her already.

At first, the only criticism I had was the length and that it didn't seem enough. Then I realized in your author's note that this is meant to be written in a blog form. So shorter would probably be more realistic. Therefore, I have no criticism.

I haven't read any good romantic comedies on this site in a long time, but I think this has the potential to change that. So, I hope you can update soon. Maybe with some more chapters I'll be able to properly give you my opinion.

Faded Soulfire

THANK YOU!

SOMEONE HAD TO SAY THAT!

I really like it. I don't think there's a woman in the world who can't relate.

Interesting to say the least. Written very well, I didn't know until the end that this was not "you" talking.

My only critique would be the category, romantic comedy? Maybe after you continue the story I will see it but so far no romance or comedy.