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persephonevii 2007-05-04 . chapter 1
I liked that last image. It was wistful and sad, like a ghost. And the idea of making the school's burnt skeleton look skeleton was great too. Despite my own dislike of my old schools, I too would certainly feel some chill and even sadness at hearing of their destruction.

It must of been a shocking thing to see. I hoped they got the arsonist responsible.
Victim of the Wraith 2005-12-28 . chapter 1
I can see it happening. I saw the house next door to a family member's burn down once during a holiday. So I can definately imagine the feeling.

You combined nostalgia with heartbreak and you did an awesome job at it.

Keep up the good work.
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