Reviews for StillBorn World - FictionPress.com

Chi Ame 2006-01-03 ch 1,	abuseAmazing, this one is! Short but sweet, they all are. Very well-written, you've put your idea across in the most successful means possible.
Infection 2005-12-28 ch 1,	abuseliked the earyl rhyme. nice theme. loved the last 2 lines.
Decollage 2005-12-28 ch 1,	abuseI like the content and the message, but not the rhyme scheme, and I don't feel this is quite what it could be... There's a lot of potential, though, so that makes it alright. Where there's potential there's always some element of likability lurking about, if not the potential itself. My only constructive comments being that you left out the possessive apostrophies- "**'s", "it's". Despite that minor detail, I really like the first line in particular.