This poem took my breath away. Deep, emotion filled. Great write.

very engaging. it keeps the reader's attention very well. I loved it.

Sara: Now that's good. I luv poetry!! Now why couldn't you make the Souta story like this. j/K.Samara: It was...ok.

i guess you have a point. very well written poem. it hits you right through.

(logged out)

o, u like angsty stuff?! u'll luv my story Black Rose

awsome poem

thx 4 the review ^.^

~Jay-Ling

Very good, I liked that alot. I'm Out.

~Malicious12.

this poem has a great sadness to it..but I really like it and I think the idea behind it is very interesting