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| gulistanlik 2007-12-08 ch 1,  | abuseAw but I like this cheese and sap! It is so cute! It seems I really like your writing style and it wouldn't suffice if I didn't add you to my favourites! This was so cute! So simple, true yet wonderfully written and it feels freshening hehe. =D I especially liked how you made it look they were official and then declared that it wasn't. Nicely done! Congratulations on another job well done! gulistanlik |
| cbprice25 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abuseCheese and sap can be amusing too :-D |
| EleanorDear 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseeh i wouldnt say cheese and sap...but hey...im a girl..i love this kind of stuff. hopeless romantic, and proud. i seriously liked the imagery is this one though |
| Perfect Bliss 2005-12-30 ch 1, | abuseaw lovely I love it! really the way it's written and the feeling. So tender Aww |
| Bob n Kazzi 2005-12-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseAs someone who knows about PMSing (not that you want to know) this is the perfect story on those days you just wish that one man in your life that you're thinking about non stop would just get bent and die. I don't know if that makes sense. But I love the story and it's made me smile on a day when I was the definition of grumpy cow. Well done. I love your work. |
| a Leader by Default 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abuseShort and sweet. I loved your descriptions in the intro. Truly captivating. |
| at this volume 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abuseThis was really sweet. From the summary I was expecting something totally different, but this was just, well it made me go "aw". You have a way with descriptions; they're flowing and poetic, but fitting. I think you should continue this, it could be intersting. Great job, and even if you leave it at this point it's still a nice short piece. |
| ButaFallenStar 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abuseI am not usually into the fluff thing, but I must say this done nicely. I believe everyone can relate to it. I bilieve the ending is is truly exquisit. I think that should be the finale, but you're the author so... but anyway, I liked it. Beutiful. Le magnifique |
| AmbroseMaximilien 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abuseAw, what a fuzzy-wuzzy tale ^-^ left a warm feeling in my stomach, which is what i am in dire need of. normally i don't like romance stories (i do now! :D) but this one was differet... just a brief kiss and a lot of background info. it wasn't boring, it wasn't sickly sweet, it was... dare i say it... cute! :D |