I liked this, your writing is very understated and simple, which to me reflected the feeling of the impossibility of escape, of fighting. You have also put Subtereanen homesick alien in my head, and that made me happy. :-) You'll be alright, trapeze-swinger. You're just uptight. :-)

this is great, i love it

haha that poem is awesome! great job...but it is a really serious poem, but it still made me smile because it is really true

Yes. But I'd rather go to Ireland. I like Irish people.

Are you Irish?

Thanks for your review by the way. :)

TAKE ME! YES! I ACCEPT!

Hilarious poem.

Very nice; I remember writing a lot of crapy poetry that evening while watching the news- first Kerry was ganna win and then sometime around midnight everyone was freaking out because Bush had taken all these states that Kerry was supposed to win. Also it was the first election that I got to vote in (hehehe.)

This is nice though- I think the throne of hypocrisy swelled to a bubble when Bush became president (50% is only half the country) he has done nothing yet in the last five years that would make me call him my leader.

Mars is a colorful alternative. I’m one of those posh girls who’d end up on Neptune or something. Keep up the good work.

Juliet.

lol :) is all i have to say!