  Dhampir 2008-09-15 . chapter 7 Pity that you haven't returned to this. Unfortunately, I see you've lost quite a bit of your reviewers that you had from the first story.
I would like to say that both have been very well written and I will be checking out some of your other work now that I see this one will most likely not be completed (I can't talk though as I've got about 25 stories all at least 60 pages long and incomplete).
Good luck with your writing and I will try to review some of your newer stuff.
--Dhampir |
| Cat (: 2006-11-08 . chapter 7 So are you going to continue this story? I've truly injoyed reading it and would keep reading & reviewing if you updated. Keep Writing! Please! |
  Friggin Awesome 2006-01-14 . chapter 7Nice! Still really good. Hopfully the next chapter will be longer. |
| Satar 2006-01-08 . chapter 7 junel seems like a pretty interesting character!! hope theres more of her in the next chapter!! |
 Flying With Fish 2005-12-31 . chapter 6whew! Sorry I wasn't able to review sooner! Man, I've been sicker than the devil's dog! XP But I like this story so far... I feel bad that I can't find anything to c&c, as always. I especially like the way we get to see what's happening with th different characters, like Junel and Baltus and Audalin! I await your next update with baited breath! ^_~
~ Nam Ghost. |
| Friggin Awesome 2005-12-30 . chapter 6 How do you do that? I start to get a tiny (very small dont worry) bit bored, and then you make the story really good again! what is this potion thingy? |
| Forgottenbrokensoul 2005-12-30 . chapter 6 Well i am a little bit confussed to say the least. But i do believe that in time i will soon find out what is going on. Until then! excellect as always.~ForgottenBrokenSoul~ |
| Satar 2005-12-29 . chapter 4 omg you alredy have a sequel up!! you sure work fast lol! the storys pretty interesting so far, is the whole story going to be from kaelan's point of view?? |
| Friggin Awesome 2005-12-29 . chapter 4 What can i say i dont know how you do it. this story rocks. Im so stunned with its brilliance that i cant think of anything else to say. |
| Friggin Awesome 2005-12-28 . chapter 3 Nice ending of the chapter. I still love this story...Im not sure what you could do to make this story bad...It just rocks. |
| Friggin Awesome 2005-12-28 . chapter 2 Thats cool i didnt exactly expexct Kaelan to be the main charactor but thats cool. Still as always an excellent story. Update soon i want to hear about this potion. And is the Etemmu some sort of group of necromacers? Where does Edan come into the story? Or does he? I love your story! Definatly publish the last one too |
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