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katy 2008-02-02 ch 1, anon.	abusethis is...amazing. i can't really find words to describe how i feel right now...a sense of the sublime, maybe...amazing
An Inside Joke 2006-12-16 ch 1,	abuseThat was great. Too much Christian writing relies of stereotypes, but this piece was very creative. I identified with the narrator right away (I also hate how in the morning I can be resolved to stop commiting a certain sin and at night I feel so awful that I did) and the dialouge was believable. Great story, my only critisism is that the setting was confusing. First she's praying, then she sees God and I think it's a picture or something until he starts to speak, then they're walking. Clarify that transition a bit.
Ironic Presence 2006-12-14 ch 2,	abuseI love Jesus. He loves us all so much. I love how he always has time for us, and practically throws himself in front of us (like a lovesick teenager, to put it very poorly), ready to be our savior from anything at any given moment. He's so perfect. This reminded me of that. It also is helpful because I'm trying to get myself out of self-inflicted despair, and thanks to His grace, I am succeeding. Thanks. :) Love your writing.
Soundless-Melody 2006-12-03 ch 1,	abuseNicely written and very inspirational. In my opinion, you have captured the character of God. It seems so true! Especially the last line. Very catchy and correct. Now, I'll be going to the next vignette. Goodluck with this promising story!
scotti 2006-12-03 ch 2,	abuseI'm speechless Orual, not to mention more than a little convicted right now too. Even though your story's main character is a teenager, that character can also be viewed as anyone at any age. For how many times have I found myself with such thoughts? I must say too that I had tears in my eyes at the end of both chapters/shorts. I look forward to you continuing these little talks (that have such an impact on the reader) with God. Until then... Scottie
Memory's Muse 2006-12-03 ch 2,	abuseI'm afraid I'm guilty of the same thing as Anna. This story has pointed out to me some things which I never took the time to contemplate and I would like to thank you for it. Yes, this is definitely a nice story to read before sending myself to the abyss called slumber. Speaking of which, I really must sleep now since it's almost midnight here in this part of the world. I'm looking forward to the next update! ~I love Jesus~
Memory's Muse 2006-12-03 ch 1,	abuseI really like this. Must put you and your story under favorites and alert! I especially loved the last line. It truly is much more difficult to live than to die. We all have a purpose to fulfill, right? I shall go on to the next chapter now.
Ironic Presence 2006-10-26 ch 1,	abuseI think I've R&R this somewhere before... do you have it under a fanfic account? I swear, I've read this and reviewed! I'm not crazy! lol. I really like the last line. Powerful, and true.
Just One More Author 2006-09-22 ch 1,	abuseThe fact that you can write so little and have it mean so much is amazing. Just over 500 words and it's better than even my most drawn-out attempts to right a spiritual story. Best part: You actually capture the nature of God (as much as one can, of course ;) ) Beautifully done.
Xn-v 2006-09-13 ch 1,	abuseNice work!I love the simplicity of it, yet the depth of its message... awesome work.
First Day 2006-06-08 ch 1,	abuseOh, this is simply gorgeous! I love the way it was written, nice to see someone else who believes in God; believers are few and far between these days. :)
myfathersdaughter 2006-01-21 ch 1,	abuseVery nice ending.
WhatWhatWhat 2005-12-28 ch 1,	abuseAlright, I want more of this. I don't understand a bit of it and I want to. Really nicely written, keep it up! Sefyroth

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