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| Capricia 2008-06-28 ch 11,  | abuseLudos is so cute! I can't wait to see if the water-demon thingy is the one Kieth saved. |
| Tee Elle Double Yew 2008-05-06 ch 13, | abuseIt's good, very creative. Hope it's not on hiatus for too too long. |
| twilightfire 2008-03-08 ch 13, | abuseI love this story, and its been on my alerts for a while. I hope you update soon! |
| millie 2008-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, just found this story. I can't wait for the updates, |
| lex 2008-02-19 ch 13, anon. | abusethis is good. please update |
| angelfacekitten 2008-02-17 ch 13, | abuseThis is a GRATE story so PLEASE update. |
| Rie 2008-02-01 ch 13, anon. | abuseThis...is incredible. Incredible. And I'll say it for the third time: incredible. I love love love Ludus and his pet names. Hehe, Ran-ran. And oh, Ran-ran has to be the cutest protagonist I've ever read. Please please update. I promise I'll give you a nice long review next time. |
| firedraygon97 2008-01-14 ch 13, | abuseHee, Ludus is such a cutie. Great balance to Tetres, the big grouch. I'm loving the way Keithran's picking up strays left and right. Great work with this story. I'll be looking forward to the next update! ~firedraygon97 |
| paputsza 2007-05-12 ch 3, | abusesee, now /that/ was unexpected. I did not see that coming at ALL. |
| paputsza 2007-05-12 ch 2, | abuseIt's not quite unpredictable. Cuz your main character's blonde and obviously uke-sized. It was like "but where's the seme" but then there he was so yeah. It was also expected that the seme woul to be a demon. But w/e. Nice story, it's different. |
| merrymowmow 2007-03-07 ch 13, | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update. |
| FoxyGrampa 2007-02-15 ch 13, | abuseThis is a transitional chapter, so I haven't much to say about it. I hope you update this sometime soon, I'd really like to see where it's going. |
| FoxyGrampa 2007-02-15 ch 11, | abuseOh no! My satyr bishi! ... *cough* I mean, poor Tetres. Yes. I am glad he's back though... in a really selfish way, obviously. Hehe. You're good at this suspense thing. The story goes a little fast at this point, but it's still good. |
| FoxyGrampa 2007-02-15 ch 10, | abuseAw come on, you can't kill off the first bl couple to crop up from this so soon! Haha. Unless you can manage to be that sadistic. Straight to the point chapter--it was enjoyable, as usual. |
| FoxyGrampa 2007-02-15 ch 9, | abuseSuspenseful! I liked it. I know you wanted to make Ludus kind of creepy--but to me he comes off as more funny. But I'm kind of dark, so... haha. |