update this one first please!please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please!

Ludos is so cute! I can't wait to see if the water-demon thingy is the one Kieth saved.

It's good, very creative. Hope it's not on hiatus for too too long.

I love this story, and its been on my alerts for a while. I hope you update soon!

Oh, just found this story. I can't wait for the updates,

this is good. please update

This is a GRATE story so PLEASE update.

This...is incredible. Incredible. And I'll say it for the third time: incredible. I love love love Ludus and his pet names. Hehe, Ran-ran. And oh, Ran-ran has to be the cutest protagonist I've ever read.

Please please update. I promise I'll give you a nice long review next time.

Hee, Ludus is such a cutie. Great balance to Tetres, the big grouch. I'm loving the way Keithran's picking up strays left and right. Great work with this story. I'll be looking forward to the next update!

~firedraygon97

see, now /that/ was unexpected. I did not see that coming at ALL.

It's not quite unpredictable. Cuz your main character's blonde and obviously uke-sized. It was like "but where's the seme" but then there he was so yeah. It was also expected that the seme woul to be a demon. But w/e. Nice story, it's different.

I was wondering when you're going to update.

This is a transitional chapter, so I haven't much to say about it.

I hope you update this sometime soon, I'd really like to see where it's going.

Oh no! My satyr bishi!

... *cough*

I mean, poor Tetres. Yes. I am glad he's back though... in a really selfish way, obviously. Hehe.

You're good at this suspense thing. The story goes a little fast at this point, but it's still good.

Aw come on, you can't kill off the first bl couple to crop up from this so soon! Haha. Unless you can manage to be that sadistic.

Straight to the point chapter--it was enjoyable, as usual.