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| -RomanticallyCliched- 2008-10-09 ch 1,  | abusenice pick-up lines and i loved the idea! |
| mellorine 2008-09-13 ch 1, | abuseHiya!~ Good work! I liked how their meeting was kinda natural, nothing forced, like the ones I've read in other one shots with authors trying to get the main characters to hook up faster. The ending was also appropriate. Cheerio~ :) |
| this requires pants 2008-08-19 ch 1, | abuseHaha now that's cute. And original. Picking up a guy by trading lame pick up lines. :) |
| lAll.of.the.abovel 2008-08-10 ch 1, | abuseIt's so sweet, I can feel a cavity coming in. I love how she dismissed 'Donny the Deranged', awesome, really. Indeed, you were right, this is the best of your one-shots. |
| Green Eyed Angel 2008-08-04 ch 1, | abuseHahahaha I totally love that story. It's one of m favourites now. Wow... that story. Who knew bad pickup lines can be so funny? And so interesting? |
| ess3sandra 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseSWEET! |
| The Professionals 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseIt's so cute and funny! Love this one-shot! :D |
| effervescent-sentiments 2008-05-19 ch 1, | abuseAww! Short and sweet. Luffly luffly. All good things to say. Except, here, "One year before...", you might want to change that. I thought we were getting a flashback. :) Anyway, completely adorable. Kudos! The peanutbutter kind. -Julia |
| Maxegirl1313 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sweet! They make such a lovely couple! |
| britty-tt 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abusehaha i loved this. Quirky and Cute! Go the corny pick up lines ;) |
| HelloLovely 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseHaha. I loved this one-shot. It had me laughing a lot and I love stories like that. = D I'm definitely going to check out your other works!! Love, Becca |
| LinnJay 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseSo this actually made me sign up for an accout. This story is absolutely hilarious! I love pick up lines. You should try this one on for size... "Why don't we go back to my place and do some math? We'll add a bed, subtract some clothes, divide your legs, and multiply." |
| simplicity is complex 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseAH so sweet! |
| LiMay 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abusehahaha! i loved the countdown part! that was so swet! she was HILARIOUS! XD being so dramatic and all AAWW! |
| orangejuiceaddiction 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseDamn, those pick up lines are really bad! =D Anyway, cute fic. |