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| ess3sandra 2008-05-24 ch 1,  | abuseSWEET! |
| The Professionals 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseIt's so cute and funny! Love this one-shot! :D |
| effervescent-sentiments 2008-05-19 ch 1, | abuseAww! Short and sweet. Luffly luffly. All good things to say. Except, here, "One year before...", you might want to change that. I thought we were getting a flashback. :) Anyway, completely adorable. Kudos! The peanutbutter kind. -Julia |
| Maxegirl1313 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sweet! They make such a lovely couple! |
| britty-tt 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abusehaha i loved this. Quirky and Cute! Go the corny pick up lines ;) |
| HelloLovely 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseHaha. I loved this one-shot. It had me laughing a lot and I love stories like that. = D I'm definitely going to check out your other works!! Love, Becca |
| LinnJay 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseSo this actually made me sign up for an accout. This story is absolutely hilarious! I love pick up lines. You should try this one on for size... "Why don't we go back to my place and do some math? We'll add a bed, subtract some clothes, divide your legs, and multiply." |
| simplicity is complex 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseAH so sweet! |
| LiMay 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abusehahaha! i loved the countdown part! that was so swet! she was HILARIOUS! XD being so dramatic and all AAWW! |
| Ryosami 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseDamn, those pick up lines are really bad! =D Anyway, cute fic. |
| found.eventually 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseyou know, i actually liked the 'made in heaven' pick up line. A friend of mine tried this really AWFUL (read: perverted) pick up line on me. It went something like "Do you have a mirror in your pants? Because I can see myself in it." ... Yeah, not exactly original. Holy crap, I actually wrote the pants-line thing before I read your ending. HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA. ANYWAY, loved it! Loved it, loved it, loved it! |
| YellowBanana 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abusethis was adorable! i really loved it! but...there was a tense change near the middle: 'Suddenly, he takes me by the upper arms and turns me slightly, fumbling with something on my back...' “Checking the tag on your dress,” he murmurs absently. He then turns me around again and looks me in the eyes...' I'm guessing the two excerpts should be in past tense like the rest of the story... But apart from that, it was great! |
| Selene-Capri Jordan 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuseaw, very cute! *adds to favorites* |
| gulistanlik 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! I like Irish too. haha. This was a very entertaining fic with an interesting plot. Nicely done. =D gulistanlik |
| Entice 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuselove it! this has to be one of my favorite... |