*mildly confused* But.. he left... then he was there... and... and...

I'm so befuddled! Your author change threww me off. This is awesome, but... what's going on?

Wow: Yumi tempted the author, and the author answers back. Some characters think that if they don't ask the 'could it get any worse' question, then it doesn't count. Not so.

Anyway, the one thing I have to complain about is the fact that since there are mainly girls in this story, pronouns just don't have the same effect anymore. I got pretty confused in the first half of the chapter. (Then again, maybe it's because I'm slightly dead on my feet...)

So... I wonder if Yumi will get that job at the bar, huh? Man, the possibilities that Yumi would have to go through... Nice touch with the author change by the way. Just wondering Terryll, you wrote "Redoing the buttons on her uniform **, Yumi cast a glance at Yu-chan." Did you mean 'shirt'? LOL!! I mean, you'd probably think that way of the female's japanese uniform, but I'm not so sure Yumi feels the same way.

Well, anyway, nice chapter. Now I got to find a cure for this sore throat I'm having. It makes singing to anime music a varitable hell.

Keep writing!

Peace out!

Eh eh! Poor Yumi, traumatized by life in the big city. But I'm sure she'll get used to it eventually. I don't have much to say about Yu-chan, since she wasn't in condition to say anything elaborate. But I'm sad about her childhood which seems to have affected her a lot. Don't worry about the lateness, it's okay, and I hope you'll update soon if you can. ^_^

Sorry for not reviewing before! Busy, busy, busy... :-( Well, I enjoyed this a lot and I think it's going to get crazier and crazier, which is a really good thing. ^_^ I like Kimidori Yumi, she's nice. And I find it cool that we get to see her letters to Nanashi-kun. Hyyakazi Yumi is pretty fun here. She doesn't scar me for life. lol On the contrary, I quite like her. Also, yay for yuri goodness! :-)

Wow. Yu-chan is certainly very, ahem, open about her sexuality, isn't she? :P Awesome contrast between farm girl and part girl. I gotta keep an eye on this one.

Whoa that was nice. I like the two Yumi the second reminds me of my character Yumi, execpt my Yumi is a little nicer. Lol anyways good chapter, update soon!

lol! Poor walked on Yumi. This is an amusing start. ^^

O.O!! Can it be true? Someone actually updated here?!? YES!Well anyway, there were two careless errors that I spotted: "the boy’s had slipped quite quickly up under her skirt." I think you meant 'hand' instead of 'had'. "The other girl had push her down onto the bed" I think you meant 'pushed'. Other than that, it certainly seems as if there is no way Yumi can survive seeing as how she has the roomate from the seventh circle of hell, LOL!! I'll watch for updates!Keep writing you two!Peace out!