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This was really good. I liked how it was simple, yet elegant. It sounds good and was overall really nice. Great job!

Okay, so I won't pretend like I knew what was going on, even though it said read and review if you understand, but I realized I hadn't read this one of yours yet. I'm going down the list and it's like, wtf? Have I read these all? LOL.

Anyway. The images in this are quite nice, even if I wasn't exactly sure what was going on. I like your use of color in this, too. Very nice. Keep writing! :)

yup i understand. this is really beautiful and intricate .. i really liked it you're incredibly talented! x

oh wow, I'm not entirely sure if I understand but I love the way its written. The imagery is amazing, nice work.

I love it whatever it means, but here's what it reminds me of :

Pills, to much or to little, sickness, fever..."As time leans towards the rapture" could that be death?and I just can't find anything in the last 3 lines, so I'm probably wrong all together...

But it was an amazing read. I really loved it. thanks.

great imagery, keep it up!

Not sure if I get your intended meaning, but I get some meaning for sure. Beautiful.

I get it - and I dig it.

nice poem

reminds me of sunset, muchly pretty, i like it, nicely done

full of powerful imagery. good job.

Did we have to understand to appreciate? I have no idea if I caught your meaning, but I made my own from it, and loved it all the same.

"Pearl jaw of horrendous misconception"

left me dumbstruck. nice title, by the way. very unique.

I loved the way this sounded. Very good stuff.

Lovely images here, really striking. Especially love 'pearl jaw of horrendous misconception' but the whole poem is wonderful. Keep it up.