this story was just gorgeouss! i read the sequel also. your an amazing writer! keep it up!

-ilovepunks. xx

hmm it was a decent ending. I definately luvd that she did not end up reaching him in time that would be TOO cliche enuh? BUt ye really awesome story. going to read the sequel now! :)

aw! :$

This story's really good. As in I'm realy enjoying reading it right now. lol i can;t seem to tear myself away to go and study P

can't wait to finsih reading great so far

Interesting story

this is the first mean review i have given, i hate the ending but thats just my opinion so i hope others enjoyed it.

this is a really good story :D

aw i love andy and laurie :D

and of course jude and kate!

loving the story so far, keep updating!

he won't wait

Since it's been awhile, I don't remember in detail how the original went, sorry. But I enjoyed the last three chapters.

For some reason, I can't remember this in the first version, but maybe just because it's been awhile.

Good chapter, though.

Are there more chapters? I got a bit anxious and read a few setences of the sequel but stopped when the "transition" seemed off. Awesome story, can't wait for everything to unfold. :)

bastard. good story

oh my gosh! you need to keep editing this story!