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| The Dark Rose 2006-10-22 ch 1,  | abuseGreat poem. Worthy of a fav I think. Yes. Yes, It is now a fav. Your cried eh? Tell me about it. There's nothing more painful than loving someone who doesn't love you. That is the intention right? Its how I see the poem atleast. Was this you? Was thsi resolved? Am I wrong in my assumption? Oh, names Daniel by the by. Nice to meet you and I guess we can be friends. he he |
| peripheral 2006-02-08 ch 1, | abusecliche or not... this poem is just beautiful... |
| e a t i n g . f l o w e r s 2006-02-01 ch 1, | abusethis is so sad...very good work here. I had something like this happen once...keep it up |
| saxophonicweirdo 2006-01-15 ch 1, | abusei love this. it sums up so many feelings i've had. great job. |
| In State of Agony 2006-01-12 ch 1, | abusei can related to this, great poem, like every single detail... |
| Winter Flurry 2006-01-07 ch 1, | abusereally very good...i really like it! Very good, very good! |
| Abby Sequioa 2006-01-06 ch 1, | abuseomg this was... amazing... it was so good. The rhyme and rythm was SPECTACALAR! I absoutley love it |
| SliversofSilverPain 2006-01-06 ch 1, | abusewow... very wow... I cried while reading this poem. Wow. *silver tears stream down my cheeks* *bows* you are a true poet |
| les petits bateaux 2006-01-06 ch 1, | abuseThis was very touching. I love the emotions in this and the words that you used were marvelous. Good job. |
| SirenThird 2006-01-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sweet! It gave me this sort of sad feeling in my stomach. I liked it alot! Good work! ^-^ |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-01-03 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. Very light and the flow is extraordinary. Lyrical, amazingly lyrical. |
| Fishing For Wizards 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abuseI think that the angst works, but I think you're driving it in the wrong direction. This scratches the surface but doesn't go much further than that. ~Impressions of a leg |
| Jezsh 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abuseso sad...really heartbreaking. I like the mix of thought and event, and the slight sense of mystery about what's happened between them. |
| none of burt's beeswax 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseAt first, I thought this was a little cliché, but the ending makes it absolutely tragic. I love that it's not the way it appears. Gorgeous. |
| writerforever 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseAw that was sad! But I like it a lot :). |