great poem, and keep the good work up.

byeKagome

i remember when i had faith like that, and im just starting to gain it back again. good luck to you with your walk with Him. ;D

I like it very much. Keep on going for Jesus!

This might be better if written as a poem, and I think retched in the first line would be spelled wretched in that case. Nice job otherwise!

Wow - that was very emotional. A beautiful prayer. All the lines beginning with "It was you..." say so much about the love of our Lord. He is amazing! Thanks for sharing the gift he has given you. God bless, always! -- J.max